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Post by ottabelle on Oct 13, 2012 2:12:35 GMT
We're at poetry in my creative writing class, so I've been writing more poems and all. I learned something through this. If you read the poem aloud, you'll hear errors you don't when you read it in your mind. It really makes a difference. Anyone else have tips?
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Post by limebirdwriters on Oct 15, 2012 9:22:15 GMT
This is definitely one for Kate I think! She's the poetry master!
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Post by ottabelle on Oct 16, 2012 6:57:43 GMT
Well she needs to get in here. -Goes on an adventure looking for Kate. Doesn't find Kate, comes back with a wooden leg-
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Post by yrdeni on Oct 16, 2012 9:05:50 GMT
Well she needs to get in here. -Goes on an adventure looking for Kate. Doesn't find Kate, comes back with a wooden leg- Is the wooden leg named "Smith"?
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Post by ottabelle on Oct 19, 2012 1:55:41 GMT
There was a woman with a wooden leg The woman was Peg, the leg was Smith They traveled together for a time Till Smith was an old rag
He was infested with worms and other crawling infectious beasts So Peg knew what she had to do And fed Smith to chipper.
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Post by loupy on Oct 30, 2012 6:50:50 GMT
HAHA Nice poem Amber!!
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Post by ottabelle on Oct 31, 2012 2:19:57 GMT
Hahaha thank you Loupy!
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